Character Actions

I am learning to relate to the characters in the text to understand their purpose. My next step is to be able to describe and explain character from the text. I found this hard at first but it got easier after I relisted that the consequence didn't have a bad consequence.

A moment in time.

I am learning to write a moment in time. To have a good moment in time you have to make sure you have the FOUR of the keywords at the start of every sentence. The four keywords are, saw heard felt and wondered. I found this easy because I already knew what an exciting moment in time it was. My next step is to use better and longer sentences when I am doing a piece of writing like this.